If you still like the designers, I think this should be in present tense. That is “like” and “seem” as opposed to what you have atm.
This sentence isn’t as clear. What do you think of “It took me the whole 30 minutes before I gave up and realized that probably wasn’t the best way to go.” Something clearer sha
An Introvert’s Journey to Being Seen — A STAR Approach
Not your classic STAR approach use case, but the thing is, I’ve been on this piece for over two months now, and while I want to say it’s the perfectionist in me that kept holding me back, I will admit that it wasn’t. It was the fear of putting myself…